possible last post

i have not decided to renew the domain. i have 48 hrs. waiting on a check.

it really mattes little - one idea for another a nd a retitle

i found these sketch points: i hopethey help.


storysketch.


events in order that they occurred:

1) begin ATC with JFR
2) receive letter from Jenny E
3) attend JCU
4) drive 10 w/ JFR
4) attend wedding
5) shake w/ nathan
6) meet and fall with lisa
7) meet and fall with carolynne
8) got over lisa with carolynne
9) ??? 99.9% sure? good. vey good.
10) craziness time - suicides and natural passings.
11) wISDOMbrIDGE?
12) parole destruction
13) CDCR deconstruction
14) Civil Rights issues
15) catching a rapist
16) securing a childs future happiness with honesty. truth.
17) LEARNING ABOUT MENTALLY ILL
18) BEING DIAGNOSED WITH MENTAL TRAUMA AS A Result of the State
19) social commentary. a new career?
20) touching bases to reach a deeper and broader understanding of these events.



what is the significant conflict?


does the wroitomg convince the reader that something important or vital was occurring?


is the settinmg descdribed with vidvid details.




sensory words:

hot;warm;angry;despised;upset;cool;brief;desire;need;obtuseness;red;orange;hard;don't blame people for being distant;
detailed;hostile;incredibly depressed;shy;deranged;


storytrelling festivgals and the types of stories that people want to hear about and love are as separatet as a type of fleeting vaporous mass of tangled up emotions.


Liberty lies in the hearts of men and women, when it dies there, no constitution, no law, no court can save it, no constitution, no law, no court can even do much to help it.-Judge Learned Hand

Truth in Life seems to constantly seek a balance between itself and its alter ego - the lie. smj


the notion to work with here: a violation of civil rights leads to the corruption for the entire system. what here affectsw the ONE affects the MANYs.

then, too affect a positive change and a chance to steer back to a course of sanity the greatest amount of need jhere them os that we must find ourselves really ready to affect the needs of the self.

then, to volley for serve. what shall take a place in the section of desire and function. what then is the form here> what ios the f nction? when the case cites show a history of attemptuing to remobved the parole syusten from the entvirmonment in califm=nia
what then?





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good night